Leaving
Saying goodbye
Airport
It was a breezy morning over in Aussie
But it was my last day there it was very
Sad having to leave because I would have to leave my brother over their.
Once all our stuff was packed it was time to say our goodbyes. First my aunt had to leave it was very sad, but then we had to say bye to my older brother it was very hard having to leave him there because he’s our older sibling.
We packed our car and said bye. We bawled our eyes out
Then we had to go to the packed noisy Airport. We said bye. He cried until we left. I was very sad to go but we had to leave.
This week and last week we were learning to put adjectives and emotion into our writing.
hi Kody my name is Iris from Papakaio school i am a year 6. I really like all the emotion and adjectives in this piece so tick for those's, but just one question i did't get is this a true story? :)
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DeleteHi Kody my name is Tim and I reading your post and the emotive language is very well used, also i"d like to know do you have family members over in Aussie? because you said that you had to say goodbye to your aunty and brother
ReplyDeleteHello Kody My name is Emma from papakaio school. I like the emotive stuff you put in there I am going to Aussie soon. Were in Aussie do they live?
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